| Her |
I like holding her hand, Holding her in my arms Never wanting to let go Never saying goodbye, Wishing the kiss lasted forever. Her smile brightens my day And her presence is even greater For then I know I will always Love her And with every Hug and Kiss Our relationship grows stronger. I feel sad when she cries, Wanting to make things better, But all I can do is tell her That I will always be there. And I just want her to know that I will always Love her. |
aww. NiCE! :D
By 
, at
February 3, 2009 at 5:06 AM
What an eloquent way of writing^^..
I love the poem..I hope someone would dare to write me one T_T
Keep on writing poems^^
By 
Lollii-Pii, at
February 3, 2009 at 5:18 AM
Are the poems based on your true life experiences?If so,that girl is really lucky! ^-^ I mean,you're such a wonderful poet.I'm sure she'll be touched by the feelings expressed in these poems (: All in all,good job :D
By Justine, at
February 3, 2009 at 5:37 AM
Oh, it's so nice :) - - Same with Justine, I think it's based on true life experience hehe. The girl must be truly lucky.. :) The poem is also fit for Valentine Season <3
By , at
February 3, 2009 at 6:39 AM
weeh, good poems.. are you the one who wrote all of the poems here?
By , at
February 4, 2009 at 3:35 AM
aww, so sweet :) i like it!
By , at
February 4, 2009 at 9:06 AM
Can i ask something??...
Is this poem intended for someone??
or the girl here is a feminine,fictional character???